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Character astheti

Heya readers , so I started this story and now I'll focus on it . I'll also focus on Fire and Fanaa but I'll update Roohan De Raah- The paths of souls a month later on wattpad.  So stay tuned with this story.

This story is very close to my heartbecause I wanted my school life to be like this, love, secret letters, secret flowers and gifts but well My school was full of stress and pressure of studies with a little bit of fun thanks to my classmates. 😭

So Jo mujhe mila nhi usse padhkr feel to kr skte hai naa. So just live the emotions, feelings and (a little bit of heartbreak) here.

Stay tuned with the story. I know you guys will find it boring at first but trust me this story is very interesting because I myself wanted my school life like this.So please read and vote and comment. Your one vote will boost my confidence.

So please support me and my story.🙏🏻😭I'm just a seventeen almost eighteen yrs old girl trying to find happiness in my passion.

Ya there will be few spicy scenes but not that spicy because this story is a symbol of pure and divine love.

Bye See ya!Yout dear writer

Azillia~~❣️_______________________________________________

I've changed the title from Tujh mei Rab Dikhta hai to Saiyaan-Mai To Teri Tu Hai Mera but I forgot to change it in character asthetics so please manage 😅 😭

ADWAIT SINGH RATHORE - 18 yrs old

Adwait is a boy with big dreams living in Rajasthan. He thinks that love is just a waste of time and merely a game of hormones. His main goal is to become a cricketer, and he feels very passionate about the sport. Adwait is an introvert who stays calm and collected and is very disciplined. For him cricket is his Sadhna he is only devoted to his goal. He is in 12th class, always ranks at the top of his class, never settling for second place. His attention is fully on reaching his goals. He has a positive outlook and sees something good in everything around him, but he never romanticizes anything he even thinks that people who reads novels and books are just wasting there time on something useless and delusional. Sometimes, he plays the flute, and he enjoys painting as well as spending time alone, appreciating the view in front of him. He really values his solitude and prefers being alone but that doesn't mean he is not friendly he is just reserved.

होश बातों का अक्सर नहीं था

दिल हमारा तो शायर नहीं था

तूने लिख दी ये तकदीर वरना

इश्क़ वाला मुक़द्दर नहीं था

तेरी नज़रों के कारण

छूटे हैं दीन-ओ-धरम

किये जा तू किये जा

अभी कुछ और सितम~

(Yup I used Abhishek Sharma's pic because damn he is so handsome and whenever I think of a young handsome cricketer he is the first person who comes in my Mind)

Same reason I forgot to change the title in it.I thought to write another story with this title that's why I changed it to Saiyaan-Mai To Teri Tu Hai Mera

RADHIKA SINGH JAMWAL-17 yrs old

Radhika is an energetic girl from Jammu and Kashmir. Since her father is in the army, they recently moved to Rajasthan. She is clever and quick-witted, not just in schoolwork but in many other areas too. Even though she has a sharp tongue but she is an ambivert , she gets shy easily,  blushes easily.A huge fan of Bollywood and even a more huge fan of cricket, she also loves reading books. To her, everything feels like love; she even romanticizes nature, For her love is her Aradhna she is completely devoted to it. Although she isn't a strong student—often studying just the night before tests and managing to pass, she is in 11th  class —she is very devoted. Radhika is a big devotee of Krishna and believes that one day she will experience a love like his with Radha Rani. She is a mess of gorgeous chaos and you can see it in her eyes.

तेरे साथ सीखा मैंने

जीने का सलीका रे

दुखों को भुलाने का

भी आया है तरिका रे

रहे हासदा तू मंगदी दुआवां

रहे हासदा तू मंगदी दुआवां

तेरा नाम जापदी फिरन सोनिया

मैं तेरा नाम जापदी फिरन~~

ADWAIT × RADHIKA

तू ही तो जन्नत मेरी, तू ही मेरा जूनून

तू ही तो मन्नत मेरी, तू ही रूह का सुकून

तू ही अंखियों की ठंडक, तू ही दिल की है दस्तक

और कुछ ना जानूं मैं, बस इतना ही जानूं

तुझमें रब दिखता है, यारा मैं क्या करूँ

तुझमें रब दिखता है, यारा मैं क्या करूँ

सजदे सर झुकता है, यारा मैं क्या करुँ

तुझमें रब दिखता है, यारा मैं क्या करुँ~~

RISHABH SINGH JAMWAL-18 yrs old

Rishabh is Radhika's elder brother and a boy who carries a lot of responsibilities. As the oldest in his family, it is tough for him, especially when he has to look after his younger siblings, who often create chaos. He is smart and bright student he is in 12th class, with dreams of his own that get pushed aside by what his family expects from him. Rishabh wants to become a singer, but as a middle-class eldest son, he realizes that reaching this goal might require giving up something important. So, he accepts his situation and tries hard to meet everyone's expectations. He hides his sadness behind a charming smile on his face but people who knows him too well can see the whirl of emotions in his eyes.He believes that one day, he will find a reason to sing again—a melody that will inspire him.

देखो ना, कैसी इजाज़त मिली है

एक-दूसरे में हिफ़ाज़त मिली है

जीने की सारी ज़रूरत मिली है

ये जो भी है, जैसा है, यूँ ही हमेशा

हमेशा रहे जिस तरह~~

SANYA SINGH RATHORE- 17 yrs old

Sanya is Adwait's younger sister and a lively and cheerful girl who brings energy wherever she goes. She believes in living life to the fullest because we only get one chance. With a playful spark in her eyes and some mischievous thoughts, she often gets into trouble in school, She is in 11th class. Sanya speaks boldly and has a quick wit that allows her to roast anyone with her clever comebacks. She thinks that since God created people with love and care, we should appreciate that and enjoy our lives without worrying about what others think. Sanya also dreams of finding a sweet melody that will fill her life with love and happiness. She hopes to be someone’s inspiration and support system while truly enjoying her life.

हीरे मोती मैं ना चाहूँ ,मैं तो चाहूँ संगम तेरा

मैं ना जानू,तू ही जाने

मैं तो तेरी, तू है मेरा

मैं ना जानू,तू ही जाने

मैं तो तेरी, तू है मेरा~~

RISHABH × SANYA

मुझे एक जगह आराम नहीं

रुक जाना मेरा काम नहीं

मेरा साथ कहाँ तक दोगी तुम

मै देस बिदेस का बंजारा

ओ नील गगन के दीवाने

तू प्यार ना मेरा पहचाने

मैं तब तक साथ चलूँ तेरे

जब तक ना कहे तू मैं हारा~~

MAHIR TRIPATHI- 16 yrs old

Mahir is Radhika and Rishabh's neighbor, he lives just few houses away. He is an energetic young boy with a charming personality. He is also a cricket fan and wants to become cricketer . He goes to  same Cricket Academy as Adwait. He is funny guy who knows how to impress someone ,everyone in the Mohalla likes him as he is very respectful and kind person too.

He is a flirting expert too , he learnt it from his Cricket coach.

And he uses all his flirting techniques on someone special. But that girl always ignores him. He goes to same school as Radhika and Rishabh ,he is in 10th class and is a very bright and smart student despite his chaotic nature.

दिल का जो हाल है

वह तुझे कैसे

बयान करें

कह दें तुझे या

दिल में रखें

बोलो न क्या करें~~

KAVYA SINGH JAMWAL-16 yrs old

Kavya is Rishabh and Radhika's younger sister . She is the youngest sibling and being the youngest she gets all the princess treatment. She is a spoiled brat with an attitude and ego so high. Even though with all these traits she is very ambitious and is fully dedicated towards her dream of becoming a Doctor. She doesn't want any distractions in her life and in her path of achieving her goal. She don't like cricket much, just watches sometimes as everyone in her family is a huge cricket fan. She is a strong willed girl but becomes a baby infront of her elder siblings. She may look tough but she has a heart of an angel. And she doesn't give a damn to Mahir's flirting she thinks he is a distraction between her and her goal so she keeps her distance from him. She is a very bright student and is currently studying in 10th class.

दिल जो तुम्हारा है

कैसा बेचारा है

माने न बेशरम

बिलकुल खतरा है

तू करे दिल बेक़रार~~

MAHIR×KAVYA

अरे थोड़े हम सीधे सादे हैं

अरे थोड़े छिछोरे हैं हम

इतनी बाते क्यू करते हो

अरे होती नहीं हजम

क्या करू अच्छी तू लगती हैं

बात ये झूठी क्यों लगती हैं

अरे जब तू भडकती है दिल पे चले गोलिया हाय

ढीचक्याओ डूम डूम डूम डूम~~

KRISH SINGH RATHORE- 28 yrs old

Krish is Adwait and Sanya's (chachu) uncle he is a sports teacher in their school. He supports Adwait's dream of becoming a cricketer and he is his coach too. Krish is a handsome boy with flirty personality he flirts with every female teacher specially with the English teacher(only teachers okay not students😭👾). He is an extrovert always laughing and joking around. He is still single because he hasn't met his match yet he has a perfect type after all but even he don't know what's his exact type . Even though he is a playboy type but he is a green flag with sunshine personality who loves hot wheels.  He is like a grown up child who needs pampering and attention all the time. He is a gym rat too and he has a secret insta account with 20 million followers on it where he posts his gym videos with his face hidden .

सीधा नहीं टेढ़ा,बायो-डेटा मेरा

लिपस्टिक से लिखना है मुझे

हर एक हसीना के,बैंक अकाउंट के,

डेबिट में दिखाना.. है मुझे

ज़रा जी हजूरी जी हजूरी,मैं करता हूं जरूर

क्या करूं ओह लेडीज

मैं हूं आदत से मजबूर

DISHA JAMWAL- 34 yrs old

Disha is Radhika and Rishabh's aunt(bua). She is a single mother of a 6 yrs old boy named Samarth, after taking divorce from her toxic husband she is living with her brother and his family but she is an independent woman she is a teacher in Rishabh and Radhika's school she teaches English. She is very serious with no nonsense attitude because she has suffered so much in life now she only wants to live a peaceful and happy life with her son .Her family told her to marry again but she is too broken from inside to trust someone again. She is in her thirties but she still looks young somehow and she has definitely maintained her figure ( Krish's personal race track). She is a kind lady but with sadness in her eyes that she hides well behind her serious attitude.

ऐसे उदासी बेठी है दिल पे

हँसाने से घबरा रहे है

सारी जवानी कतरके काँटी

पिरि में टकरा गए है

डर लगता है इश्क़ में करने भी जी

दिल तो बच्चा है जी

दिल तो बच्चा है जी

थोड़ा कच्चा है जी

हाँ दिल तो बच्चा है जी~~

KRISH×DISHA

प्यार हुआ इक़रार हुआ है

प्यार से फिर क्यों डरता है दिल

कहता है दिल, रस्ता मुश्किल

मालूम नहीं है कहाँ मंज़िल

प्यार हुआ इक़रार हुआ…

कहो की अपनी प्रीत का मीत ना बदलेगा कभी

तुम भी कहो इस राह का मीत न बदलेगा कभी

प्यार जो टूटा, साथ जो छूटा

चाँद न चमकेगा कभी

प्यार हुआ इकरार हुआ ~~

SAMARTH MEHRA  - 6 YRS OLD

Samarth is Disha and her ex husband's child. He is very mature despite his age. He studies in same school as Radhika and Rishabh. He has only one motive in his life

" Find a good boy for His Mumma".

He is the heart of the family everyone loves him so much.

छोटा बच्चा जान के ना कोई आँख दिखाना रे (टुपी टुपी टाप टाप)

अकल का कच्चा समझ के हमको ना समझाना रे (टुपी टुपी टाप टाप)

भोली सूरत जान के हमसे ना टकराना रे

नाधिन-धिना नाधिन-धिना नाच नचा देंगे

छोटा बच्चा जान के~~

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OTHER CHARACTERS

SURINDER SINGH RATHORE

Adwait and Sanya's grandfather

Age-68

Retired Army officer

VIJAY SINGH RATHORE

Adwait and Sanya's father and Krish's older brother

Age- 42

Owns many Cricket Academies .

MONIKA SINGH RATHORE

Adwait and Sanya's mother

Age 39

Housewife

(Ya I know they are very young but there's is a reason that'll be revealed later🤫)

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MAJOR YASH SINGH JAMWAL

Age -44

An army officer

KAVITA SINGH JAMWAL

Age- 42

Housewife

RENUKA JAMWAL

Radhika and Rishabh's grandmother

Age-65 yrs old

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ANIL TRIPATHI

Mahir's father

Age- 40

A police officer

BELA TRIPATHI

Mahir's mother

Age- 38

Housewife

KAIRA TRIPATHI

His little sister

Age-5 yrs old

Studies in same school as his.

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KARAN MEHRA

Disha's ex husband

Age- 38 yrs old

A jewelry shop owner

KOMAL MEHRA

Her ex mother in law

Age-61

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So these are the characters . The story is waiting for you all so please read it and vote too .Aapke ek vote se iss gareeb ka bhala ho jaayega😭🙏🏻

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